cosmictinker21 said:So, you were actually looking for sweet little verses from me?
Did you honestly think the stuff I used to sing was just too
complicated to follow or make sense of?
Well, just because I wasn't singing for you to track or decode back then
doesn't mean I'll start doing it now;
—What do poets like me even matter to people like you? —so just leave
my work alone,
And go ahead, try to drift off to sleep with whatever it is you can actually grasp;
Because I don't lull anyone to sleep—and you’re never going to
get me anyway.
Walt Whitman
Come on, W. Whitman Dell, you’ve got it all wrong. Seriously. Maybe try actually reading what’s written for once instead of just slapping down those garbage translations that completely miss the point. Use that youth of yours to focus.
So, here I am, playing the part of the grumpy old lady for you.
Did I ask you to feed me sweet, sugary rhymes? No.
Was my song earlier really that difficult for you to wrap your head around?
To grasp the reality of it all? It’s a tall order. Most people spend their lives skimming the surface, terrified of what happens when they actually dive in. They want the comfort of easy answers and polished lies. But if you're looking for the truth, you have to be willing to sit with the discomfort. You have to look at the wreckage and realize that nothing is as simple as the news cycle wants you to believe. It isn't about finding a single answer; it's about accepting that there might not be one. That's the part everyone misses.
I wasn't exactly performing a solo concert just to get you to follow along.
I get it—or at least, I used to. Now? I’m just as lost as anyone else.
What am I even doing here? What does someone like me, a poet, have to offer someone like you?
So, just walk away from what I’ve built. Leave my work behind.
Just sink into whatever little comfort you can actually wrap your head around.
I’m not here to soothe anyone—and frankly, you’ll never truly get me.
A lullaby is meant to rock you, not knock you out. Length doesn't equal quality. Just because a language is long doesn't mean it's actually any good.
You see how some people just ruin the very song they're singing when it comes to love. Don't you agree, wearyhawk83?